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Gutting - Part Two
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There’s a pain
So deep down
Well more of a squirming, I suppose
But it’s so deep down inside me that it’s really hard to know
Where it is, though I guess
It’s technically just below my lungs
But since being noticed it’s been spreading
And now it’s on my tongue
Which is screaming out “Dear God!
Lord in heaven, save me, please!”
(It’s funny if you think about it
Because I don’t often believe)
But this feeling lingers still
Down there, as if it’s right between my ribs
Slowly gutting me

Killing me
Defeating me
Destroying me
Confusing me
Depressing me
Despising me
And ruling me
It’s telling me
To finish me
It’s hating me
Hurting me
Hitting me
Breaking me
Wounding me
Waning me
Suddenly slaying me
Waking me
Walking me
Waxing me
Taxing me
Screwing me
Fooling me

SOMEHOW IT’S HELPING ME

Taking me
Shaking me
Somehow it’s making me
Be who I want to be
See what I want to see
But when I know what I want
Then I’ll know when I’m wrong
And I’ll spin it all back
To the start of this song
©2007-2009 ~77th-Brigade
:icon77th-brigade:

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I have such an obsession with the ribs tonight.

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:iconraphaelevangelist:
And I don't really favourite poetry at all.
But both of those...
pretty damn good!

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The trap I set for you
seems to have caught my leg instead.
:icon77th-brigade:
Sweet, thanks a bunch Miche.

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My body's a zombie for you

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